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Maybe by ~suspicious-butterfly:iconsuspicious-butterfly:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


__Maybe__

You never really did love me,
Maybe I only say that,
Maybe I try real hard to believe it.
Just maybe because it makes it easier for me to forget you.
Act as if I never really meant anything to you,
So next time I think of you,
I wouldn’t be reminded that something beautiful was there, was lost.
So I wouldn’t cry over the fact I’ve lost you.
Maybe Instead of remembering how much you say you loved me,
Maybe instead of wondering if it was really true?
I act as if you never did,
So I wouldn’t hold on to the idea,
That something is still there between me and you.
I don’t want to have to hold onto something,
That could be a lie,
That could possibly be fake.
Either way,
Thinking its real or not,
It still will make me cry,
And my heart will continue to break,
Over and over again,
Thinking over,
That I’ve lost something
That meant everything
To me
©2006-2009 ~suspicious-butterfly
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Author's Comments

i know i said i wasnt going to submit anything because of all my poetry makes things worse for friends around me, but this peice i know is not that good but i have had to submit it, im just fed up with everything .. im tired and here is a poem bout a relationship that has made me overwhelmed with pain and love

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~Poison-Maker Jun 10, 2006, 1:23:57 AM
Aww thats soo sad!:(
Glad that your posting more works now:clap:

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~Nothing is too disturbing for a Wilson to think up! Wait... that came out wrong...~
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~Do you want to make people’s head explode? Sure! We all do!!~
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~lostlittlelambie Jun 10, 2006, 5:17:38 PM
this is really good...it sounds like it comes from the bottom of your heart, and thats what makes it easy to relate to....im pretty sure i know how you feel.
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~Thomo-Kill-World-666 Jun 10, 2006, 5:32:44 PM
awww ashlee=(
i like this..........and right now, im pretty sure i can relate to this
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~suspicious-butterfly Jun 10, 2006, 6:17:54 PM
im not sure about posting everything i write, just ones like this that just nag at me to put them up =P
thanks for the comment. :hug:

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**__I'm trying really {HARD} not to cry over you ... because every tear is just another [reminder] of how I don't know how to let you go
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~suspicious-butterfly Jun 10, 2006, 6:19:13 PM
id like to think it come from the bottom of my heart.
thankyou for the comment an thankyou ever so much for the fav, i appriciate it alot :hug:

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**__I'm trying really {HARD} not to cry over you ... because every tear is just another [reminder] of how I don't know how to let you go
:iconsuspicious-butterfly:
~suspicious-butterfly Jun 10, 2006, 6:20:03 PM
thankyou for the comment :hug:

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**__I'm trying really {HARD} not to cry over you ... because every tear is just another [reminder] of how I don't know how to let you go
:iconpoison-maker:
~Poison-Maker Jun 10, 2006, 11:16:28 PM
NP:hug:

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~Nothing is too disturbing for a Wilson to think up! Wait... that came out wrong...~
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~Do you want to make people’s head explode? Sure! We all do!!~
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~sammitysams Jun 12, 2006, 1:58:41 PM
this is beautiful ash, i'm going to :+fav: it :)

i'm so glad that you're submitting things again, keep on doing it :)

:hug: :heart:

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The Sammity
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"Ouch... Balsamic Vinegar in my sty..."
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~DarkLord-Raven Jun 12, 2006, 7:55:58 PM
Why is it that when you are in pain... physical, emotional, both, one cause by the other... either way.... you can never feel what it was like to not hurt. to feel ok... to fall asleep without that pain in your stomach, or that hole in your being... I hate that feeling... and I can't say I've hurt the wirst... and though we all say it its not fair to say its not fair... but at the same time its wrong to deny someone that right. Life is life... Hurt is hurt... and no one will ever know exactly how another hurts... its your own personal hell, sorrow, and what I like to call "HEINCH" its a word I came up with a couple of friends and brothers. I've been afraid to write it online cause I would hate for everyone to start using it and we not get recognition... but I don't care... about a lot of things right now... Heinch: Do you ever have that feeling of helplessness, anger, depression, sadness, malice, loss of self control, even to the point of self destruction.... although there are many stages and levels of Heinch... this is it... and my dear you are in heinch... I've experienced it but as I said I cannot feel what you feel... I can only sympathise and feel my pain with you, and as a total stranger I can only offer to feel a little bit of your pain in my own way, and hope that that tiny flame in your heart and soul never dies... although a flower wilts the roots bring that flower another sprout the next season... be a Rose Bush and not a Rose... Do not wilt and die... rest in your current state... lick your wounds and feel all the pain don't shut it out and let it eat you and overrun you... let your heart bleed out and those tears run. I still do... but I can only live and help... Take my humble friendship of a stranger and may you find... however long it takes... your bright road.... Love, and sympathies...
Yours in Dark shadows,
~Raven

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"...Quote the Raven, 'Nevermore'."
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