"Dreams"
Asleep,
away from reality.
Unable to escape,
fate's mortality.
Some nights,
I'm drowning,
wake up, coughing.
Other,
I'm strangled.
Waking up,
head dangled,
over the bed.
hands wrapped,
around my neck.
Balancing along the ledge,
testing,
how close can i get to the edge.
Looking down i see,
no one around to catch me.
Overbalanced,
I fall.
Sudden pain is felt.
Waking up,
I see,
unfamiliar walls,
staring back at me.
Escaping,
down the white halls.
A lady,
redirects me.
Back in bed,
I lie,
questioning,
where? how? why?
Fate's mortaility,
was almost my reality.
With a chuckle,
in my mind,
"better luck next time."
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Ever woken from an incredibly vivid dream? woken from a dream that seemed incredibly real?
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vivid dreams creep me... it's so hard to tell between the dream and reality...
i really really like this poem... relate-muchly
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save a volvo, ride Edward Cullen.
yus plz.
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**__I'm trying really {HARD} not to cry over you ... because every tear is just another [reminder] of how I don't know how to let you go
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~Mandi~
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